Wednesday, January 26, 2011


Follow me, my pretties
To a land beyond the sea
We’ll laugh, dance, be merry,
And sing in harmony

Join me my darlings
Come and take my hand
We’ll take the road before us
To a magic fairyland

So bury all your troubles
Throw away your fears
We all shall be together
In a land with no more tears

Profound, right? No not really, but I'm rather proud of it. After all, it's my first poem that actually sounds half way decent. Oh, but it needs a title. Any suggestions? Anyway, I hope you are all having a delightful week!
Love, Emily
Documented by Emily at precisely 7:15 PM

8 comments:

  1. Kiwi D. FruitJanuary 26, 2011 at 8:34 PM

    you wrote that?! Nice! I liked it! Kind of skipped to the end to see who you were quoting, to find out that you were just quoting yourself. =)
    ~Kiwi~

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  2. KristenJanuary 27, 2011 at 4:14 AM

    Very nice, Emily! :) You do not really need a title for it. SLots of poems don't have titles. Emily Dickinson is one poet who rarely gave her poems titles.

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  3. EmilyJanuary 27, 2011 at 5:09 AM

    Thanks guys!
    Maybe it doesn't need a title after all. If Emily Dickinson didn't give her poems titles, they must not need them. Still, if my poem had a title, it would feel so much more complete, you know?

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  4. *Lizzie*January 27, 2011 at 10:29 AM

    Emily! That is a GREAT poem!!!!
    I was wondering who wrote it at first then I saw that you wrote it!!!! AMAZING! Great job!! Speaking of writing stuff, I just finished my second story the other day! I'm really excited!
    Alena and I miss you and Kirsten lots!
    Praying for you two!

    A Servant for Christ,
    Lizzie

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  5. AlenaJanuary 27, 2011 at 11:57 AM

    Very nice poem Emily! How very lovely it is! Oh, how I miss our old writing days! Remember sitting back on our porch scribbling away. those were the days! We will have to try to get together soon!!!

    ~Lady Florimel~

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  6. EmilyJanuary 29, 2011 at 3:02 PM

    SECOND STORY?? That's awesome, Liz! Good for you!

    Your back porch was always the best place for scribbling. I miss sitting back there, discussing all of our genius ideas... Good times, my friend, good times.

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  7. Daughter of EveFebruary 11, 2011 at 3:06 PM

    Wow... that's really good, Emily. At first I thought you were quoting. =) I love it.

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  8. *Lizzie*February 14, 2011 at 1:36 PM

    Happy Valentine's Day Emily!
    God Bless!

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